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[G2] [Mod] Thanatos
Update 29.12.2012: Screens and video
Update 23.11.2012: Screens and small story
Update 9.7.2012: New screens
Update 22.6.2012: New screens and lot of new infos
Update 27.9.2010: New screens and lot of new infos
Update 28.8.2010: New screens and lot of new infos
Hi,
I would like to present this way my mod called "Thanatos". I don't want to go to details here, everything I put on my web, see direct link below. There are hints about story, infos about world, people etc. Check it out.
Moreover I want to emphasise one thing. The work on this mod is dependent on the interest of the community. If I see that there is lot of people, who want to play this mod, I will work harder and probably better, that is kind of motivation.
Please comments, suggestions, tips in this thread.
Aeternitas
Link to my mod: http://darkforests.info/pages/web/pr.../thanatos.html
Link to my web pages:
http://darkforests.info
Geändert von Atmus (29.12.2012 um 19:09 Uhr)
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Some of the descriptions on the page are senseless, weird, or downright garbled. Like something Google translate would spit out.
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Be exact. What is what you don't understand?
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It's pretty understandable. Faby is doing his grammar/literary style Nationalsoziali... stuff.
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The dark sinister world covered in the night, overgrown with high old trees.
Remove that article.
The boughs similar to the crooked limbs of old people.
You need a verb.
A traveler, might be on his pilgrimage, passing around.
Either remove the apposition and make the verb present tense, switching things around, or add a "who" before might.
More I do not want to tell yet.
Very awkward phrasing.
The alone people will not live long.
"Alone" sounds like shit in that sentence.
Remove the "to."
Someone has told once if you look into the abyss the abyss will look into you.
Add a "that" after once. The word you're looking for is "said," not "told."
for I believe the modification without speech is not so good,
Unless you're referring to this specific modification, remove "the" and add "a."
That's it, basically. The rest is either over dramatic or... Eh.
Oh, and contractions are your friends. They give a bit of an authentic feeling. The excessive use of non-contracted forms just shouts, "I'M NOT A NATIVE SPEAKER!1"
Unless you're Dumbledore, in which case, FORGIVE ME SIR
That be all.
Geändert von ICFabian (15.08.2010 um 08:57 Uhr)
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More I do not want to tell yet.
Very awkward phrasing.
Well In fact I love it , but that's a matter of taste
Sounds much more epic and worked than the supposed normal version.
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Right, noticed several mistakes from a cursory glance, more awkwardly constructed than outright unintelligible. I'd recommend having native speakers gloss over the mod before it's released.
With that out of the way:
I don't want to go to details here, everything I put on my web, see direct link below. There are hints about story, infos about world, people etc. Check it out.
If you want to create a thread for discussion about your mod, you should at least provide a summary of your mod here, so the community has something mod-related to discuss and critique. Right now all I'm seeing is a grammar lesson.
Ach Fry, Ich hab dich mehr als der Monde, die Sterne...das...fail.
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The world looks nice, though, but the 3ds files you've put for public download are just slopes.
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Right, of course, the files has almost nothing to do with the mod. They were just my first steps in the modding world.
I provided some information, not much, but something. I am going to add more, in few days. Newer screenshots, newer information. Everything has its time. Just come from time to time on my website.
And of course, if there is anything you want to know, just ask. I might reply
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Hey, a sig is a sig, but no need to overdo the smiley thing.
Ach Fry, Ich hab dich mehr als der Monde, die Sterne...das...fail.
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UPDATE 2
New (16) screens and lot of new info, stories included. See my website.
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UPDATE 3
I added a feature list of all features of my project. You can find the list here: http://darkforests.info/pages/web/news/news1.html or here almost completely down: http://darkforests.info/pages/web/pr.../thanatos.html.
There is 37 pictures available here: http://darkforests.info/pages/web/pr...hanatosim.html
Please leave comments. I need some feedback to have a motivation to continue forward. No feedback no motivation no mod.
Geändert von Atmus (11.06.2012 um 10:29 Uhr)
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How is your mod progress going? From what ive read in your website its more than a mod, it seems like an add-on, judging from the size.
PS. ''Thanatos'' is a Greek word that means ''death''... why you choose that?
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Zitat von GothManiac
How is your mod progress going? From what ive read in your website its more than a mod, it seems like an add-on, judging from the size.
PS. ''Thanatos'' is a Greek word that means ''death''... why you choose that?
Now I have no time to work at the mod. Sorry for that, but I have things to do, which are more important. I presume to come back to modding in winter times or spring, probably.
Thanatos mod is independent mod, a really big mod, so I need lot of time to finish it. The mesh is already almost complete, there are only several small things to do and it's done, and I can start scripting.
The name Thanatos (the death, darkness, gloom) and the main story have many in common, but I don't want now to tell the details.
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I hope this mod will be finished and i wish you the best of luck.
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Zitat von carnage12
I hope this mod will be finished and i wish you the best of luck.
Thx. I'm sure it'll be finished. The question is when.
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Zitat von Atmus
Thx. I'm sure it'll be finished. The question is when.
Better later than never.
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UPDATE 4
THANATOS IS ALIVE!
I uploaded 18 more pictures from gameplay of my mod. Also I added more infos about the story, world etc.
See my webpage - News section and read the article My Thanatos Mod: The Beginning.
Please leave comments.
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good! nice effort mate! every new mod in english is very welcomed! hopefully you gonna finish it sooner or later
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