[Godcrusher]

Whell all know that there's a lot creative people here and that many of you write poems not just about gothic, but loads of other stuff. So post them here here's mine


Creation



Gods made nature, gods made sky and sea
They made hate, pain and thy.
They made sorrow, grief so strong,
United all that and put it in me.

They made fire, with wich i burn,
They made trust, wich i earn.
They made water, in wich i drown,
They made sun. for blood red dawn.

They made air, in wich i breathe,
They made love; what i need.
They made earth in wich i rott,
On it we fight, for our god.

And so i ride in battle once more,
Dying in wish, for unending gore.
Gather now, those who survive,
Build now temple to honour Thor.


Then they came, the christian hordes,
With touges so sweet, with lying words.
Spreadng their faith on our lands,
Burning our temples, cutting our hands.

And so it is here, the mighty Ragnarok,
The end has come ,who christians own.
Erased by time, forgotten by all,
In Valhalla we wait, sparing no one.


For the time will come, when we will again rise,
Kill the angels, and united under the banner of ice.
Fear now our wrath, wrath so old and ancient,
We will kill all of thy, christian god's creations!

[DeadlyArrow]

nice poem, Crusher! i would like to read some more of yours

when i was about 14 i created small poem and your remined me this one

God made sky
God made the seaside
God made you
God made God new

don't think if it's much sense in it, but anyway...

[Rostas]

I have my creation here too.....hope u like it...(a nature and war poem)...The second will be about gothic

Love,Nature and War

Nature ties itself to love
The bloody sun at day above
It burns my heart and starts to feel
What others cannot even yield

The blood it ties itself to war
And nature starts to get so poor
The human hand will rid the world
And this day will become so cold

The war begins,the blood covers the land
But no one drives the human hand
The people fight and die in pain
But at the end,everithing is in vain.

The end has come and the land is full
The people had become so dull
But in that day the humans swore
That there are greater things than war

They made peace,and made it clear
That they would keep theyre friends so near
And in the days of great despair
To aid them in their need with cheer

[_DieGo_]

sorry... i didn't have time to read your poems UNTILL NOW... very good... you are really talentated... all of you... it's not just a compliment... you are talentated.. i'll try to make one too but it wont be like yours ... im already thinking of sth anyway

P.S: i mean from both threads(Poem and OT poems)

[rekinu]

sorry... i didn't have time to read your poems... very good... you are really talentated... all of you...

as Werner said...very diplomatic... wich one is it ? ... did you or did you not read them....
nevermind, great poems Crusher and Rostas, but both of you are talking about war , blood and things like that, you are very pesimistic...I like that... good job...

[_DieGo_]

i read(at past) all the poems... okok i'll edit my post if it is so important... ... i think everybody undestood what i tried to say...

[DeadlyArrow]

he didn't read them but he FEELS that they are talented

[_DieGo_]

i edited.. is it better now?

[WernerTWC]

Yeah, good ones, all of them, also Deadly´s is cool!
THX@all for witing and sharing them!

[DeadlyArrow]

ok, don't mind

[Archibal]

Very nice poems

[Godcrusher]

i have more if you want

[rockfest]

i have more if you want

That would be nice...I really like your poems...just look at his signature...i bet you created that no?

[WernerTWC]

i have more if you want

Of course we want!

[DeadlyArrow]

i have more if you want

yes, would be very interesting to read them

[_DieGo_]

@godcrusher
of course we want more.. i just like to read your talents

[HyRock]

I´we written some poems but they are in Estonian and not narely as good as the ones here.

[Godcrusher]

That would be nice...I really like your poems...just look at his signature...i bet you created that no?

hm yes i did

@hyrock

No matter post them anyway im sure there some who will understand your poems and tell the rest of us what's all about

As time runs, as fire burns,
In dark we dwell, our hate grows.
Knowing we are lost forever, abandoned,
We sing our poems, dying and strangled.

Poems of strenght, poems of wisdom,
Now only fading memories.
Forgotten by people, forgotten by gods,
Now only dusk, shadows remain.

As wind blows faster, cries we hear,
Cries of horror in wintery dream.
Now we awake, we again stand,
Hope in our hearts, hope for end.


With sword he enterd, the tomb of terror,
With light he battled, the freezing darkness.
He heard our voices, out of the fog
He cursed our pomes, poems of death.


'Kill us', we beged, 'free us of pain,
show us your mercy, cut our vains.
Burn our bodies, and stab us in heart,
Do it, or else you will not escape our wrath.'


As time runs, as fire burns,
In dark we dwell, our hate grows.
Knowing we are lost forever, abandoned,
We sing our poems, dying and strangled.

[WernerTWC]

Cool one,... THX, buddy!

*g* ... next one, please!

[Archibal]

My new poems (hope the're better)

I wal, I walk alone,
The path I walk you shall not know,
I walk, I walk in the dark,
May it bind you in the sun
It started with blood
It ended in sin,
We can't be stoped!
We're at Armond's will!

Evil rise us from the graves
God forgot us in the rains
Evil, evil take us now!
Make our pain stop!

Evil angel with drak wings
We have come to see you here
Evil monsterr with one yea,
Take the angels from the sky,
Evil master with two swords
Kill us now before we're gone!