Bei meinen Aufsätzten gehts es ncith darum, dass alles perfekt klingt was sich schöner anhört, einfach das dort kaum Fehler sind, der Rest ist meiner Lehrerin egal.
Fett einige Fehler korrigiert.
A: How long did you live in LA Miranda?
B: Oh, not a long time, 3 months, it was only holidays, nothing more.
A: And where did you stay?
B: In a hotel near the Universal Studios, there was a swimming pool and a garden.
A: How do you like the life in LA?
B: It's great! There are many nice people, good food and it's much fun!
B: Oh, I had holidays, we didn't have school. (Warum erwähnst du das wieder?)
A: Tell us about your free time.
B: Well, we explored LA and we've visited many places. We were on the California Screaming, in the Universal Studios, on the Walk of Fame, and in the California Adventure Park.